Thunderstorms

This poem was really truely beautiful and i love the emotion that just bursts out of it

i enjoy reading poems with alot fo emotion and you wrote this perfectly!

great job!
5/5

I really enjoyed the symbolism you used to show how you deal with your own personal thunderstorm. the relation is something that we can all relate to, and the imagery gave it a very poetic feel.

Well Done.

I wake up to the sound of ice
I feel sadness in my gray life.
Clouds grow clear
As rain streams through
My world is so black without you.

This captured my attention and sets the tone
The subtle rhyme scheme is perfect for my taste

I feel anger as the sky shakes
I'm tired of living a life so fake
Thunder strikes and I'm too scared
Lightening breaks my heart
As I crumble inside myself and fall apart.
Hail falls to the damp ground

Now the passion and emotion is bursting through

As I try to scratch my way out.
For this pain has trapped me underneath
I feel so misplaced
Waiting for the weather to change....

The storm climaxes and we are left with the hope of a silver lining
I am impressed with the entire poem

5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

So many emotions wrapped up in one poem...! wow!! it's short, but great. it's like....heartbreakingly beautiful... :3 great job. 5/5.
btw: i like the motto you live by. :D and i hope we can become friends. =]]

--**skye~

This is really a wicked poem.. i couldnt find any place to add on.. very nicely done.. i bow down to the master.. lol..