It feels like you can look inside my heart, Silvia. I guess we are never the only ones feeling certain things, nor that it is age-related to have this kind of pain.....
Beautiful, could not have said it better myself:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia what a beautiful poem. Your words ring so true.
Love
Cindy

This was amazing to say the least.. a really good quote turned into an amazing poem. Sad, yet you used the poem and the meaning behind it throughout your poem very well. The different language here, was a nice change and a great challenge, :]

5/5.

Sylvia,
So much truth to the feelings portrayed here. Reminds me of my divorce and how I didn't want to get one for the pure and simple fact that I thought forever was forever. Needless to say somethings are better left than done. Anyways, a beautiful poem you have woven and I sincerely adore the "how long is forever gonna last" theme of it all. Loved the emotions in the poem. Great Job.
Take Care,
Kay

Loved the Old English in this piece. Wonderful !

Youthful or aged,
a crushed, shattered heart,
dost not discriminate.
No more, no less anguish,
'tis the ultimate price
we bear for love.
^^^
Loved this part and the wording is perfect.

A wonderful masterpiece created from a quote ... excellent read, wonderfully penned

A crushed, shattered heart,
dost not discriminate.
No more, no less anguish,
'tis the ultimate price
we bear for love.

These lines are powerful. It says it all and
because of love we bear everything. I like the
language you used..excellent write.

Your poem is great and I like reading it. Great choice of band too, 5/5.

'Powerful' seems like the right word for this one. Beautifully expressed.

all the best and take care