Comments : HAHAHA.

  • 15 years ago

    by Shadow Heart

    I really like it!

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    I just love how you put names in the poems!
    I must say, I was being surprized throughout the poem, because, the first three stanzas made it look like a break-up poem, then it made me think it was about a boyfriend, and in the end, you give the reader the truth-this boy is your friend, but you don't know whether you are truly in love with him, or not.
    I can relate to this very well, exept for the name, hehe, but I've been in love with a friend before(a classmate), and I felt all of those things you describe that you feel when you're around him. My favourite lines are:
    "No, I'm not in love with you.
    Who am I trying to assure?
    Am I trying to assure you,
    So that you can be with her?"---because here you give your love a glimpse of light, that maybe this boy loves you too, and if he knew about your love, he'd be with you.
    I liked how you changed the last two lines of the repeating-stanza. Like you finally realized you are in love.:)
    Nice work. I enjoyed this one a lot.
    5/5 keep it up, you make great pieces. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie

    AWWWWWWW! I feel your confusing emotions! This poems is so well written, it's like I was there with you, like you were telling me about this boy and I was there to comfort you. It's beautiful! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    Very good! It's really cute and I'm sorta going through the same thing. Hope everything works out with you and that special guy! 5/5.