Comments : Runaway Romance

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Found myself drawn to you
    Was it my past emotion to blame?

    You saved me, you made me let go
    Then I fell for you and didn't even know.

    I'm not a fan of those lines .. They just seem to throw off the poem . And you have some problems with the flow . AND , I would remove the last stanza , the second last makes a better closing statement and doesn't drag on . Other than that , really fantastic . It was easy to relate to and for the most part your rhymes weren't forced , and they were original . Well done , 5/5