Nour....

Yes, you are a princess indeed...but a sad one now. I wish I could do magic and make it alright for you. I have seen you and him together and I feel it within my heart you belong to him sweetheart...I am seldom wrong when I feel things. Give it time, dear heart...leave him alone for a while and then he will start to think back and feel the emptiness in his world without you in it. If he truly loves you, he will return. In love we must never be proud, so please find it in your heart to forgive him when he does..maybe he is just afraid to commit himself. I have known men that ran away because they felt they loved their girl so much, thy started to lose themselves..but they always returned, because when you find that special person who makes you feel alive and loved..you are drawn to her/ him and feel incomplete without that one in your life.

I hope this helps!

I am happy to see you post again and ins'Allah your next one will be a happy one, dear girl:)

Much love and a huge hug,

5/5 Ingrid

Well this poem was beautifully written, I can feel the emotions within you as i read in between the lines. I like the idea that u used the open/close book as a metaphor of your relationship.Well everyone whose in love will face thier ups and downs.So yeah i hope that there will be a happy ending in the end for the both of you.All u need is just have faith, and faith will guide you throuh the storm.
It was certainly a delightful to read.Keep it up

Excellent Job

I think the mark of a good poem is one that evokes memories and pondering thoughts from the reader. This poem is definitely one of those, having been on both sides of the equation of the emotions displayed here, I can easily identify and sympathize.

Also written well, making it easy to read.