by Mask of Pain Mar 28, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You make me feel loved, but now you go like a dove. |
by Jad
I liked this poem a lot. Austin |
by Hollymariee
.. There are alot of forced rhymes . You're trying too hard . Those things should come naturally to good poets . Try to not make it rhyme , because you have a really good idea . Just try to make a strong statement with your words . |
by Lady Nik
Really great poem. i loved it. Shanik |