The dawn of my heart.

by Mask of Pain   Mar 28, 2009


You make me feel loved, but now you go like a dove.
I would smile when I saw you, but then you moved miles.
I take a step hoping not to trip. I fall and no one is there to call.
I sit in a lonely room, hoping to fly home soon.
You took my heart and you throw a dart.
The hole will heal; I will learn to have to deal.
You made me bitter, you made me sour.
The teats of your kiss, is like a diss.

I will move on, soon my world will break to a dawn.
The clouds will turn a grey, and I will be at bay.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    I liked this poem a lot. Austin

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    .. There are alot of forced rhymes . You're trying too hard . Those things should come naturally to good poets . Try to not make it rhyme , because you have a really good idea . Just try to make a strong statement with your words .

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Really great poem. i loved it. Shanik