Nice poem. it's touching and gets you curious about what's going on and then u get to the end and understand a little more.

fav part: VVV

"I love him a lot
As well as my dad
But the thing is that's why I'm sad
Daddy isn't there for me"

^^ that made me go "ohh =( well wth man!"

i liked it. =]
try 2 make the ending more dramatic though. don't lose that boldness!

~tia