Secret Admirer

by Insoluble   Mar 29, 2009


You have such an alluring face,
that keeps my heart beating...

starring at you at a long-term gaze,
is an awe-inspiring feeling.

I'd give anything to be with you;
a wish-fulfilling prayer.

I know my request will not come true;
all I want is to breathe your air.

You glimpsed at me, from across the room;
If only you knew what I was thinking...

See that my love is a spreading fume,
it feels like my heart is singing.

Every beat would tell you a story,
on how much you mean to me...

On how you're my pride, my joy and glory;
this feeling is a boundless loving spree.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lewis

    Awesome poem...i can relate to that...i think everyone can...but if you can put more feeling into it, it would be better...would be heartfelt

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Hey this is another great poem. You really should post more. I'd love to read them. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    This was a great poem! Great job, I liked how it created a picture, a story. Keep up the good work. :)
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Allie

    Awww!!
    sounds like you have a powerful crush on this girl.
    very good choice of words, and keep it up. (:
    you'll never know if they like you unless you ask
    ~allie~

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Ha ha, I believe the word is "smitten"is it not?
    A very well written love poem and you didn't even wait that long to post it:)
    I love the word spree, it is a word of abundance..like how love should be also.

    Good job on this, keep them coming!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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