Sad but full of love. It seems as if you are letting someone go, telling them not to look back but move on, they have done all they can but something in you will not let them in. You have done the best you can. Well done. 5/5

This was a really heart filled poem and I liked it a lot. You had a good flow and rhyming pattern. Austin

Cindy,
My Dear, you have expressed so many feelings in this poem you have created. A beautiful testimony of the heart and the ache that sometimes we feel like we have given everything and still there is something left after the pain. The love will reside in our hearts even throughout the worst of our pain.
You, my friend I know where you are coming from and know that you shouldn't burden yourself with guilt let alone anyone else. Someday perhaps it will be understood. Just keep your faith and your head held up. Know that I love you. Great write my dear. So many heartfelt emotions went into this and I know the message you are trying to portray is one of love. Nothing but love for you in my heart always. Take Care, Kay

This is very nicely written, could feel the sadness infact lot of it.

all the best and take care

This poem is trurly heart felt indeed. I can feel the emotions that runs through this poem. Though the content is sad, you have displayed it with full of serenity. The tone that you have set in this poem was really good as it compliments the context of it. I think you have a beautiful ending, though this person whom you are talking about has soft of left u(i might be wrong) but then again you didn't blame him cause you know that he has already done whatever he could do. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5

Love, sadness as well as regret swims within
this write. It touches the heart and lI hope
that you are okay..take care.

I truely do love this poem. it is one of the very best i have read in a long while. It made me think about a past experience i had, thinking about how i know these words now but wish i couldof heard them then.
I've readmuch of your writing and you are very talented

please keep writing

with love <3-
-MoonLight

Some really well expressed words for closure ther. you show alot of understanding and care for the other party and this is a very good tribute.
5*

The raw emotions, and the depth of your hurt can be felt throughout this sad yet beautiful write Cindy.
It brought tear to my eyes for I know what a delicate heart you have and, whatever the situation is, it must be tearing you up inside.

Promised to stand beside you
And as long as I still breathe
I'll try my very best
All your hurt and pain to ease.

I know that every word of this stanza came straight from your heart.You are the true definition of a sincere friend.
Take care.
Paul...

Filled wit emotions ... i can totally relate
i love it ...amazing