OMG! this poem is so good! its very well ritten, a great flow and understanding and its sad! very very well done.. 5 outta 5.

(Last line 2nd paragraph -- I pray that you are ONLY sleeping flows better as well as last line last paragraph -- I only hear one heart, And IT"S weeping)

Other then that PERFECT!!
Keep it up!
*Hunny*

Oops bad memory lol. i mean -- I hear no heart but mine and IT'S weeping.
This flows better (last time i 4got what the line said lol)

This is an amazing poem its beautiful and sad