by Ingrid
Azzza, |
by Cindy
Kira |
by The Prince
The only problem I had with this piece was the sentence lengths and structure; other than that, there was some great imagery here, and you've used some execllent descriptions: |
by Sylvia
Vivid images portrayed by your words. This verse was especially touching to me because I had never thought how innocent children could mistake rockets as flying angels, not knowing those rockets will kill. |
HI, this poem rings true pretty much for our whole planet, tranquility seemingly elusive to all who would have it. |
by Nee
Azzza my friend.. |
by Jenna
5/5 Kira |
by Jenni Marie
"Land of the golden dome |
by kelleyana
Reading this poem, there's nothing left to say. Your words just blow me off my feet. I love it . Very well done, kel. |
Your work is impressive. Imagery and wording was spot on. This was so vivid I could feel the pain and the devastation of the innocent. Good job |
by Lu
Such a touching read Azzza and the imagery you created so very heart wrenching. |
by Sunshine
This is extremley inspiring ...and FLOWLESS..he rhythm was amazing. |