Mike's epitaph

This poem was very good and the flow again was good and the rhyme was good meaning its not forced. This poem spoke to me a lot because I kind of missed my rhymes every once in a while. Good job.

Wow, I agree with just about all of the comments above. This was such a unique and orginal piece, you nailed it so well. Each line was extremely powerful and full of meaning, leaving the reader stunned and blown away. Great descriptions, imagery and above all deepth. There was so much to think about in this piece, you wrote this wonderfullu. Well-expressed emotions and thoughts. 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

A man that understands himself without a doubt. He knows he makes mistakes every now and then just as humans do. I'd say this poem is like marking your "spot" Well done (:

I will have to say that I agree with all the comments that have been left, nothing much I can add other than it is well written and it is a novel idea to write your own epitaph or at least I believe it would be yours. No matter what you are true to the words you write and those honest words will never die, they live on long after you. Well done.

Great poem,

My favorite part is:

He borrowed skipping reels of rhyme
Missing his mark from time to time

You seem to think as a poet that poeple dont quite understand or apprectiate your talent enough. I will read more of your peotry to get a chance to see your skill. and perhaps understand your talent better.

Randy