Sinning Sainted Cynic

Eh it was a little short for my liking but still good,
again the rhythm was nicely done
great job

This was a another excellant poem. You got the rhyme really good and the flow was excellant. These poem was true for the most part and again good job.

For me, this was an interesting read. I felt it was put together nicely, and interestingly. I enjoyed how you wrapped it all up together nicely at the end. The only thing that I was a bit iffy about was the title. I understand that those are difficult to come up with, but I think you could have gone with something stronger. Still, great job. (:

Human nature is so vivid and unpredictable... still you have captured it well.. sumarising us in three categories... and defining our nature...

well done ...

Very short, but it still feels like its complete. Very catchy. I like it Good job 5/5 i will probably go on to read another poem because of the length of this poem its not fair because mine was long :)
-laura