Favorite Lines:
"Cherry blossoms burst into pink confetti and litter the ground."
`Cherry blossoms are so pretty, I loved the imagery I got here.. "pink confetti litter the ground"

"Tender blades of grass, peeking through dark drab browns of winter,
Slowly changing the landscape into a velvet carpet of green."
`Well done with this.. It is very uplifting, the dark brown grasses of winter changing into green.. almost like a "velvet carpet".. ahh I love spring!

You two did an amazing job.. the imagery in this was amazing.. making me want spring to show its colors soon!

5/5.

Wow this piece is amazing. The vivid images that both of you have display really stuck out to me. Each and every lines didn't let me down as you have painted mother nature with full of colours.The both your words really blend well with each other, i really couldn't tell whose lines are whose.

Excellent Job the both of you
5/5 from me

TJ and Silvia,

I love this ode to Spring!
I have no favorite lines to qoute, because I loved them all:)
Very uplifting and cheerful and in a way it's an ode to God and his work:)

*hugs to you both*

5/5 Ingrid

Yes indeed this surely is a masterpiece of praise, and worthy of praise. The two of you have done a beautiful job on this poem, nature poems always have been a favourite of mine, you guys made me remember why i love them so.Well done on an excellent job

Grant

A beautiful poem of Spring

Daises frolicking in the meadow, swaying in the wind, greeting butterflies,
Dashing and dancing through the air, gently kissing each flower,
Urging them to surrender their fragrance to sweeten the Spring air.
Bees watching in amusement, knowing this task belongs to them.

I had to pick this stanza I love daisy's and butterfly's...Great imagery....you have painted a beautiful picture of spring.
Great job!
Love Cindy

A beautiful colab by two tallented minds.Absolutely loved it.
Paul...