This was a good poem but I think you could do a little better cause I know you got it in you. Usually when people rhyme they do it through the whole poem like you did except for the 3rd stanza but overall this was a good poem. 5/5 ^_~"

A heart breaking plea to say the least.
It's a strong poem with good wording and images came to life by your words.

Good job!

5/5 Ingrid