I want you, I need you, I love you

by Ingrid   Mar 31, 2009


Under the board walk we hid,
dressed in bathing suits
Hair all wet and tangled,
no harm in what we did

"I want you" a soft moan,
shivers down my spine
Succulent soft peachy lips
warmed me to the bone

Sun tanned hands caressed
my goose bump covered skin
Eager to your touch, I trembled
My love, we were so blessed

"I need you, I love you"
murmured softly in my ear,
as you took off our clothes
"Be mine, my baby boo"

We went all the way
on the soft shaded sand
Two young lovers alone
on a hot Summer day

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  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A well penned romantic poem Ingrid, and very tastefully done. Love on the beach, and what Love!
    Well done!

  • 15 years ago

    by Daniel Fink

    This is beautiful gave me goose bumps keep writing like this

  • 15 years ago

    by NoUr

    Hehe, just another beautiful cute romantic stories of yours :)

    keep them coming...

    take care, wish you the best!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow Ingrid you have painted such a beautiful scene. i can visualize the 2 lovers on the beach.The choice of words really got me into the mood for love

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I have to agree with TJ's comment. Love on the beach, near the water, sounds of waves. What better way to create memories. Tasteful, sensual. Well done. 5/5

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