I am unknown (happy ending)

by Some guy done with college   Mar 31, 2009


I am unknown
you cannot see me
unless you really try

When we are near
you still feel alone
as if I'm your shadow

I only wish you would see me
when you need someone
when your feeling sad

your crying on your bed
near a bloody sink
and a rope near your head

now you stand on that chair
holding a note
crying...

i see you ready to go
but this just can't happen
slowly moving...
so i scream

and you just lay their
crying...
and i won't let go
never again

I am known

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  • 13 years ago

    by ReadyToBloom

    I love this poem..both endings.
    it makes you really think about who matters and who sould matter

  • 15 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    Very dark and emotional 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    I enjoyed both endings, This one i especially enjoyed though, who wouldnt? It has such deep meanings if your really read what your trying to say here. Always know, you are known. :]

    5/5

    ashley

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