by Michel Mar 31, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
In my mortal world |
by ibelievedhim
This is beautiful! Its almost like lyrics, this would be a great song. Its very unique and different from most people's writing. So another great job 5/5 :) |
by Stuart
I feel the exact same way atm.. my ex fiance just did this to me.. cept she cheated on me read my new poem.. |
by Lady Nik
I loved this. everything about it was creative. your diction and syntax, your style. wow.. you have a gift. keep it up babe. Shanik |