Comments : Blood Hounds

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    Your title caught my attention, and the words kept me reading. I don't like the flow in this write, though the first poem was wonderful and painfully true.

    "Im constantly reminded
    of all my wrongs
    and none of my rights"

    I like your use of Blood Hounds to speak of your wrongs, and your guilt being it's ferocious bite. Well done.