The title of this one immediately caught my eye. But truth be told, I think the scene in which you spoke of the rain and the water was overused.

I liked your use of emotion, you just brought it out without hiding it behind riddles and beautifully spun words, but at the same time the bluntness took away from this work at some points.
A good write, but I would definitely love it more if you spoke of emotion, more of emotion and how you feel; how the loneliness and the cool rain against your skin makes me feel. Instead of just describing things like physicality, you should allow the emotion to shine in your poetry. Hope to see more soon. With more emotion, the same blunt emotion and not as much repition of a sole fact.

3.5/5 if possible ^^