I was apprehensive when I started reading this, I was unsure of the structure but it developed beautifully. The emotion isn't to intense which fits nicely with the image of you beginning to move on from the feelings of love, even if not from the friendship. I was able to relate to this as an individual but it did not lose the authors own style. It was a very enjoyable read. One small typo "heart wont beat" should be "heart won't beat".

Awww.... beautiful: ).....and so sad...the friend zone sucks:/