This was rather sad. I could feel emotion through your words which is a good thing even though they were negative :p
Overall I thought this was a good poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5 ^_~"

Beautiful. it was brilliantly written. such depth and meaning behind every word. perfect.
--lovedroughtmelody

Well, have you ever heard of the self fulfilling prophecy? When you set out thinking you will not succeed, you are bound to lose!
I think this poem is really sad, in several ways..You did however get the message across in a good way.

good job:)

5/5 Ingrid

I feel both pain and acceptance in this poem. You come across as being saddened by the prospect of losing this person which obviously is very natural however it also feels like there is some acceptance that you understand the need to move on with your life. Underlying anger is also apparent in this piece. All in all a very well written piece that keeps the reader's attention mentally and emotionally.

Once again.... amazing: )

Good job