Nothing Lives Through Forever

Wow thats rly good. I dont understand the full meaning but it sounds good... :)

Great poem, flows extremely well, I read it a few times to try to get the main message that it is portraying. I failed to understand it. Not that it doesn't mean anything, its just I couldn't place its message. maybe you could help!!

The mirror on the wall
Is just an imitation
The cracks upon it's surface
Just proof of limitation.

*Wow...I love how you started this. When you talk about the mirror I think about a person being hurt, to where you can see their pain on the outside as well. I love the imagery*

It's dusted and dark,
Spiders paint it's side
The dazed gaze it reflected
Show no mercy to reside.

*The second line was perfect!! Such a creative line. Most of the time people use spiders in a scary way, but the way you describe them on the mirror is very beautiful*

The mirror on the wall,
Is smeared across with dirt
Reflections become distorted
But so real stays it's hurt.

*I love that you repeat "the mirror on the wall" Lets me know how important the mirror is. Once again I think about a person here. Hope I'm not understanding this the wrng way. The third line was my favorite. Love your word choice.*

No one's cleaned it in it's years
It finally begins to shatter,
Why oh why is it fear,
The mirror just doesn't matter.

*Aww such a sad ending. One thing that bothered me a little was the first line. You don't need "it's". Other then that I felt you did a wonderful job. I love the style and the flow was flawless. You never let me down lol. Keep it up hun. I enjoy your stuff. Nik*

This is so amazing !!!

The best thing about these verses is the depth which they reflect. Fear surely does over shadow lot of things in this life.