Weak

by Deana   Mar 31, 2009


Why
are you
without will
feel the cold breeze
Adrift in dark seas
Floating alone, sinking
Endlessly searching for strength
Heaven holds back her approval
She pours out her wrath and resentment
Upon the weak, who choose to die in chains

An etheree...syllable count 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Awe, Deana, that was so beautiful! :) I loved how you formatted it, it went so well with the entire piece... and the atmosphere of the entire piece just blew me away. :) Very good!!!

    5/5

    Bri~

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Nice work Deana, I really love your ending lines, very strong, great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Really strong, Deana.
    I agree with you 100%, we should always try and be strong and fight for ourselves:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I can't seem to do formed poetry this well but I absolutely loved the poem. It really was a sad write in a sense. But you have written it so beautifully as always.
    Take Care Dear,
    Kay

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