Comments : Weak

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I can't seem to do formed poetry this well but I absolutely loved the poem. It really was a sad write in a sense. But you have written it so beautifully as always.
    Take Care Dear,
    Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Really strong, Deana.
    I agree with you 100%, we should always try and be strong and fight for ourselves:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Nice work Deana, I really love your ending lines, very strong, great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Awe, Deana, that was so beautiful! :) I loved how you formatted it, it went so well with the entire piece... and the atmosphere of the entire piece just blew me away. :) Very good!!!

    5/5

    Bri~