I like this poem very much; good job : )
I think the concept of the story it is trying to tell is very well; the short & sweet poems are my fav hehe. hope the story ends well.

I loved this poem. It was excellant. The emotion in which you wrote this is good. But it is good as you said to not interfer in other peoples lives. Austin

This is well done, i feel that you are confused and having a battle within yourself. very well written though.