by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Apr 1, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
This isn't my best, I needed more time. Perhaps I'll write another. Lesthat's not an easy subject for me. |
This is an excellent write, the meaning is deep and the words fit in so well. You have delivered deep emotions as well - it could be with the tools you had to work with I presume. Heavenly metaphors flowed as a gentle breeze in the spring of passions, I could feel the rhythm of your heart expressing your loss. Good Contrasts between happy moments and bitter ones. I understand the pain in this poem all to well. |