This is an excellent write, the meaning is deep and the words fit in so well. You have delivered deep emotions as well - it could be with the tools you had to work with I presume. Heavenly metaphors flowed as a gentle breeze in the spring of passions, I could feel the rhythm of your heart expressing your loss. Good Contrasts between happy moments and bitter ones. I understand the pain in this poem all to well.

Peace and Love, Joe