Its really good!! i love it... they flow was awesome!! you really have a way with words!! :)

Awe.
This is so beautifully written.
you have an amazing talent.
gooood job hunn.

-Shaandy.

Ive read better.. lol.. i kidding.. this is really lovely.. well done shanik..

I think you did a good job with this poem. You really explain how you feel when you just have fall in love and how it feels when you're love is returned

Great free flow with a subtle rhyming patern

The theme of the unknown heart is really driven home with a great choice of emotional and passionate wording

well done

This was a masterpiece. It's structure and pattern was unique. I thoroughly enjoyed it. You had images that were created in just these words. I could see all this on a easel. A blank canvas. You described and depicted a beautiful blossoming love. It's growth expanding everyday with you. I'm terribly sorry that it did not last. Or perhaps it has. I think I'd like to see you and this best friend of yours try to make something beautiful happen together. You speak so fondly of that person. :) Anyways This piece was epic and drew a perfect ending. It was stunning in its vibrancy. And the flow was magnifique! I loved how you portrayed each stanza with such defining strength. It was brilliant. So magnetic. Like an unknown force was drawing me in.
Bravo!
*applauds*
5/5

-Lilium