The Eyes of a Lover

It's very romantic and your depiction of the incident is almost perfect. Loved it!

Dancing together beneath the moonlight
the reflection gracefully moves on the water.
Holding me tight, whispering in my ear:
'the stars in the sky don't compare to your eyes'.

*What a beauitful way to start a poem. I love the imagery and the use of dialouge*

As those soft lips gently brush upon mine
the heart in my chest races faster than ever.
The kiss is broken, but the passion remains
roaring heat radiates from every part of our bodies.

*I love how you describe the kiss without being dirty. Very lovely details. I feel like I'm watching a movie.*

The wind starts blowing, ever so swiftly
almost.. so as not to interrupt the moment.
Sharing our love, but without spoken words
only staring into the eyes of a lover.

*Not your best...that must have been a typeo. This was incredible. Everything about this was well done. I hardly read love poems and I'm glad I read this one. It's so emotional and deep. Very nice job. Nik*

This was absolutely gorgeous.. a very beautiful scene, one that is written with awesome imagery. Well done Bree, this was really well done and may be one of the best Ive seen from you in quite some time.

Good job hunn. :]

5/5.

Haha, I'll tell you what's blowing [and its not the wind..]

MY MIND!!

:)

Brilliant Briana, and if you ever put "--not the best, I know. :)--" EVER again on your poetry, I will fly to America and kick your buttock to Timbuktoo. :)

You are a brilliant writer, and I LOVED the indepth descriptions in this poem.

Very well done, definately a 5 / 5.

:)

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Nicole.
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