by Nonz Apr 3, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Please forgive my guilty tongue |
by Deana
This was really beautiful...I really love the rhyme scheme. An outstanding job! |
by Tom Swart
Very nice and a good read over and over - the words were chosen well and your thoughts played out perfectly on the page. I have to say I like for no other reason than I liked it... |
by lostgirl
I love it, your style kind of reminds me of edgar allan poes work, dark yet filled with a writers passion. Great job |
by Nee
"I shan't implore, and leave on cue |