"I shan't implore, and leave on cue
I shan't implore, but leave on cue"
-I find those lines the perfect closure to your poem, they so much demonstrated why you chose the title in the first place.
Loved it.
I really love your ideas, and you tell me I'm creative..ppffttt !!

Write on =)

I love it, your style kind of reminds me of edgar allan poes work, dark yet filled with a writers passion. Great job

Very nice and a good read over and over - the words were chosen well and your thoughts played out perfectly on the page. I have to say I like for no other reason than I liked it...

Nice

This was really beautiful...I really love the rhyme scheme. An outstanding job!