Amazing..
I remember reading this poem soo long ago in slang, and I think now I got it clearer than before, of course I did not comprehend all the parts, will discuss this later with you.

sore Destiny
reject thy creed
sour the tree
of bitter seed

I deeply loved this part, I can see that inspiration filled you to the bone that you related love and vice to nature and destiny..loved that !

He said it once
yet twice she fell

Does that include how we girls fall too easily?? haha j.k Love the picture presented in the whole last stanza, but these lines were my fave.

I didn't know this poem is so good !
Well done babe