by dontlookpassmytears Apr 3, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Her childhood was a world of pain |
Thank you for the comment I will try and work on not forcing my ryhmes but again thank you. |
by AnCi
Another amazing poem! I loved it how you finished every part of the poem with repeating the same line.. But at times i can feel that your rhymes were a little forced.. |