Reminds me when I had a fatel problem, and every one thought I died, for jumping off a cliff. I tried to do it in style, but failed, got broken bones though. Last words I said was, "See you on the other side." a 5/5 poem indeed.

This poem was excellant. IT had good rhyme and a good flow to match. But you should try to enjoy life somehow and trust me I know it's hard but still try. Good poem though.

Wow, this is an interesting poem. I quite agree though I think life is pretty boring, but I also think I'm contributing to that boredom. This was well written, and had a good flow. The emotion was great. It was a little cliche, but you made it your own. Good job.

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Very good.. i like very much... keep it up..
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Funny as hell. :)
good job.

To bring about your own end no matter what people say or do to try to stop you. That's what I thought this poem meant. The speaker sees only darkness and longing for a change, the only way that they believe that they can end the darkness is by dying. But what they don't realize this that they are taking the easy way out. It is easy to give up, to stop fighting. The speaker must be able to to face the end yet keep fighting.

Liked the poem and the discription that you used mayed my heart skip a beat.