by Hallo A Lilium Apr 4, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
It's like a lie that you continue to tell |
by Hope
Wonderful |
Wow very good work your a good writer looking forward to reading more ???? |
by Lady Nik
Wow this a very good poem. i'm adding it to my favorite. you should write more. you have a great talent. Shanik |
by Saving Grace
I liked this write. I thought it was really creative and unique. I loved your choice of wording and it was kept sort of simple, and wanst forced. But i must say that i thought your flow was a bit off in some parts though. But apart from that its an excellent piece. 5/5 |