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by Steady Stereotype
The flow in the write is off, expecially in the first verse. Though after it flowed more naturally. "It's like a lullaby as the baby cries, Like the painful nightmare where sadly the truth hides," This is a great line and my favourite in this poem. A lullaby of a babies cries. A non cliche yet bittersweet meaning. Well done.