I Had To

by Lady Nik   Apr 4, 2009


Sorry I couldn't be there
For you always.
Tears streaming
Hearts bleeding.
I couldn't handle
Knowing this was fake.
This love
This life.
I had to go
Had to break.
The ties
Believe the lies.
Now I can see the moon
Behind the stars.
I'm not longer lost without you
I'm struggling
But I know I will find someone new.
Forgive me
Because I've sinned.
I could never be perfect
And I would never try.
I had to go.
To better my life.

*Not my best...most likely my worst. just had to get this out of my head*

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  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I like this one more than the other. More expressive and it flowed well. The word choice, again, was good. The 15th line confuses me though.

    Still, 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Wow! So much emotion and lots of pain.
    I love your word choice and the way you made the poem flow without making it sound forced. Natural talent here, I love it! 5/5 from me :) - Katie

  • 15 years ago

    by guy named Guy

    This is not your best.. dont be modest.. this is really good. but to be honest i think the last line could be said better.. but thats just me.. but this IS REALLY GOOD.. so dont be doubting your own work okay..

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    I dont say its your worst.. its actually really good... has a good flow

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    If this was not your best
    than dang something is wrong.
    Lol I liked it alot.Youhave talent.
    Like to see more.
    5/5
    -kortney

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