If this was not your best
than dang something is wrong.
Lol I liked it alot.Youhave talent.
Like to see more.
5/5
-kortney

I dont say its your worst.. its actually really good... has a good flow

This is not your best.. dont be modest.. this is really good. but to be honest i think the last line could be said better.. but thats just me.. but this IS REALLY GOOD.. so dont be doubting your own work okay..

Wow! So much emotion and lots of pain.
I love your word choice and the way you made the poem flow without making it sound forced. Natural talent here, I love it! 5/5 from me :) - Katie

I like this one more than the other. More expressive and it flowed well. The word choice, again, was good. The 15th line confuses me though.

Still, 5/5