Well I am your last second |
by Krathia
I like this. The general atmosphere was very creepy, yet there's this haze of sorrow hovering above it. That haze was solidified with the repeat of "last second chance" and "death of innocent". And while we're at it, did you mean to say "death of innocence"? |
by East Poetry
I would really like to hear this coming from you the artist. You know, In the way you meant it to be. |
This is a bit uniquie for me. intresting indeed. |
by Jad
This poem had a very good flow to it. The rhyming flowed right along with it at least for me. I liked your using of a gun going to the grave. That was nice. At any rate good job. |
by katie
Well I am the pain and sorrow |
by Kimberley
Wow. that is fabulous. I sort kinda love it. :) 5/5. wonderful. and beautiful in a twisted way. |