Comments : Go As You Are

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Those who don't accept you
    Just faces in the crowd
    The only ones who matter
    Already, you've made proud
    ^^^
    Love this stanza Jenn .... such truth !

    Excellent read my friend

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    Knowing there's a haven
    To which you can return
    Open hearts left waiting there
    To soothe what comes to burn

    Home should always like that , a safe place to return to. I love this stanza, so reassuring and sincere. Your rhymes are perfect and flow smoothly. Excellent job Jenn.