Beautiful, Deana...I read it out loud, several times.
Peace of a sunlit day, the image of lovers lying on the sweet grass beside the river underneath the willow....I would like to be in such a place with someone special:)
I love the old English very much, it gives a certain class to the poem.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

"Beseech the robin, sing soft my lovers tune
Of his deepest secret yearnings fill thine ears
From this place of endless beauty, left too soon
Mine eyes will search through dismal fading years"

^I love these lines Deana, but the whole poem was beautiful, I think you did a very nice job with the language, great work!