I'm sorry, but this is way to over-dramatic. At times it seems very forced and like mindless dribble. Also, the little tongue-in-cheek comment "the best poem I've written" doesn't come off as interesting or charming, just arrogant. Sorry. |
by Sapphire
*First No Need For a Name shouldn't be talking. That was way harsh, this site is for criticism and praise, not just plain mean comments. |
There was a name |
by Pesamenteiro
This is a truely amazing poem, i can't find anything wrong with it. |
I agree with RayLeen's first two lines and I also agree Sapphires comments about 'No Need For A Name', yet this is a free site and everybody is entitled to their own opinion I think though if he classes himself as a lyric writer that he should read lyrics not good poetry. |