by Lady Nik Apr 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You can't take back the pain |
Very well written. I can relate to what you're saying a lot. Good job. |
by AnCi
This is a very good reflection of you feelings.. and i can feel your hurt.. but it doesn't really feel like a poem to me except the last for lines |
I loved this one..very good work! |
by Kuro
They say "time heals all wounds." but there are some things that time cannot erase. in the same way, saying "i'm sorry" won't make things right again. i deffinately could feel it in your writing, the feeling of hitting rock bottom, and being left unfulfilled... empty. |
Ok i think this is really really really good.. i like this one alot.. cause i can relate to it.. |