by Lady Nik Apr 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I feel so much inside |
by Tom Swart
Holy dear mother of god... your poems are like finding a osasis in the desert after 6 days with no water. You have an excellant style that I hope others will find and enjoy as I have today. I have added you to my favorites and when i am dying of a poets thirst I know where to find the words that will quench that fire. |
by Kuro
It's really sad. the feeling of being bound and chained by your inner torment. you did a good job of describing how you feel. well done |
by AnCi
I love the message in this poem.. :) And it is a good one.. I would just give you advice on one thing; either rhyme all the time or don't do it at all.. because it's hard to follow if you keep mixing it. |
by Skyfire
I know how it is to feel completely alone...you've described it exactly. I loved the line 'Waiting for the atmosphere to crush me.' |
Your not alone.. im always here for you.. |