Your not alone.. im always here for you..

I know how it is to feel completely alone...you've described it exactly. I loved the line 'Waiting for the atmosphere to crush me.'

I love the message in this poem.. :) And it is a good one.. I would just give you advice on one thing; either rhyme all the time or don't do it at all.. because it's hard to follow if you keep mixing it.

It's really sad. the feeling of being bound and chained by your inner torment. you did a good job of describing how you feel. well done

~Ben

Holy dear mother of god... your poems are like finding a osasis in the desert after 6 days with no water. You have an excellant style that I hope others will find and enjoy as I have today. I have added you to my favorites and when i am dying of a poets thirst I know where to find the words that will quench that fire.