Wow.. this is actually quite depressing and sad to read.. I see where the love comes from, but this is just a chilling 'goosebump' read. This wasnt a spectacular poem and didnt blow me away but it was just okay. Lots of I's and you's and ect. words that could be deleted. Some words were great, but the word choice was rather simple.

A good job,
decent effort..could use more thought and could be longer.

5/5.

This is a very sad poem. I like the emotion in it...you portray the feeling well...its a little choppy but I liked it.

Wow, i really don't know what to say, it left me speechless even though it was short it still had powerful words and emotion.

I loved it

5/5