by Lady Nik Apr 6, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She is the girl |
by Sumit Ojha
Oh friend this is excellent work... and full with feelings. 5/5 |
by KJ
Great write. I liked the voice and your choice of vocabulary. Nice flow and overall well written. 5/5 |
by Kimberley
Oh wow. omg. i just LOVE this one. its so beautiful in a sorta heart breaking way. very wonderful. |
Its good... love it :) |
by Obscura
This is a brilliant poem i liked it a lot i think there was nothing wrong with the ending overall it was meaningful it had a good rythem |