Well, there is nothing wrong with your grammar:)
I love the message in this, how we sometimes have short but meaningful relationships with people that lateron in life turn out to have been stepping stones.

Good job, Inge:)

5/5 Ingrid

This is a great poem the imagry is clear and strong it has a deep meaning which is heartfelt and sincire there was only one error i could see and that was when you wrote That the last message has already been send it should be sent at the end but apart from that

well done

Hmmm you seems to absorb whatever possitive out of whatever comes in to your life ...just a thought ...:)