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by CanUKissAwayMyPain
Because I could not stop death, He kindly stopped for me. ^Nicely way of openin your poem here. i like it He tore at my skin, deep within, Not listening to my plea. ^wow bery imagie. gave me a small shiver. nice flow as well As I stand, the shadows become night, And the darkness of death eases the pain. ^wow bery powerful lines you wrote here. wouldnt change a thing Death drinks my blood, as I scream for acid rain. ^scarie... i could see that through my mind. There he stands... death... in a clear, moonless sky. ^amazing line... I then wait for the rain, as I slowly die. ^ a nice way to end your piece here. i love it. very dark n deep you have here. i'll keep reading on. Copyright (c) 2009 written by me. 5/5 for me TaKe CaRe, Frenchy